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You're not here               
You're not there
You're not anywhere close to home
You're in hell all alone
Wishing upon the open flames
That you'll die once more
To get you out of here

To get you out of here
A wish upon a burnt throne
An open flame in Hell
While you're all alone
Sitting in your new home

It's warm all around with patterns of the flames
People are there too
Heating up this room
But you still seem cold and alone
No one wants to be around you
No one wants to see you
No one wants to feel your pain
No one wants to love you
For you
Except this one person
You wish they were here
But they're not and never will be
It's a path that "God" has chosen for you

So you have to sit alone in this dark flaming room
This Hell is everyone's Hell
Yours more than theirs
How you wish they were here
But they're not
Get over it

Like a broken heart across the floor
Blood spill here and there
But not here or there
But over their there and over their here
'Cause this heart's never been broken, Only torn

How you wish they were here
Living this Hell with you…


[This Hell is Earth, life]
©2006-2009 ~Kratos20801
:iconkratos20801:

Author's Comments

Some of it doesnt really have a beat or w/e you wanna call it, so sorry for that
Just feeling down lately, my friends are fighting, everythings messed up and such
And this poem was kind of inspired by some emo like song called "Goodbye" by Archive [ an old, not longer existing band]
Ya so w/e...

AND DON'T CALL ME EMO! >C

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:iconangemon513:
Good god! that's wonderful girl! *presses his "INSTA-FAVE' button*

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Y yo sé que no es querer,porque en tus ojos yo me puedo perder,contigo olvido lo que es temer,acaso no sabes que tu eres para mi,la noche,el dia en mi vivir,la sangre en mis venas,lo doy todo por ti,contigo el mundo no tiene final,y el tiempo no se nos va
:iconcatgirrl246:
:hug: I understand. Everything will turn out alright in the end tho :D

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you don't have to cry anymore
:iconkratos20801:
You're probably right. :hug: :glomp: :hug: :glomp: :hug: CAT!!!!
:iconangemon513:
No prob ^__^ :hug::glomp:

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Y yo sé que no es querer,porque en tus ojos yo me puedo perder,contigo olvido lo que es temer,acaso no sabes que tu eres para mi,la noche,el dia en mi vivir,la sangre en mis venas,lo doy todo por ti,contigo el mundo no tiene final,y el tiempo no se nos va
:iconeqinox:
wow thats amazing, i hope u feel better if ur feeling down :hug: :glomp: *gives u a cookie*

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So I lay down this single white rose. To Kayt of Armageddon, the death of a hero erases the sins of a villain.

I have to sit like this. If i sit normally, my powers of deduction fall by a factor of 40%.
:iconzelos22:
ooo, i like this one. its got a lot of very powerful words and imagery. good job!

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:lemon:
:iconclairenay16:
This poem was interesting. Your perception of Hell is unique and you express the idea well. I liked how you write your emotions into the poem. That helps a reader identify with the complexity of reasons behind the work. It makes it more relative to an average person.

And no I don't think you're emo.

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"It is the function of art to renew our perception. What we are familiar with we cease to see. The writer shakes up the familiar scene, and, as if by magic, we see a new meaning in it." -Anais Nin
:iconkratos20801:
Thanks, EQINOX!!! :glomp: :hug: *eats it* xD

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